Monday, 18 June 2018
Adrenilin- Dinghy Racing
My learning goal was being able to use descriptive words. First we watched a clip this one was about dinghy racing then we brainstormed all the main points and ideas and then write down. I liked writing it because I had so many ideas popping in my head. I found it hard editing but I am getting better at it.
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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Ni Sa Bula Vinaka Blake
ReplyDeleteYour adrenalin writing is dazzling. The first sentence is a real good hook it makes me want to read more!