Tuesday, 15 October 2019

Holiday Writing

Nose Like… A light green leaf covered in large and small yellow and black warts .

Eyes like... A dragons with bright yellow scleras and deep black pupils.

Ears.. like endless holes carving into the sides of a small  triangular head.

Feels like… A slippery green bar of soap slithering out of my loose grasp.        

Sounds like a small bark somewhere down below beneath the reads in the dark water.
       


A Frog


5 comments:

  1. Kia ora my name is Briana and I go to Gisborne Intermediate
    I really liked your amazing Frog and The way you described him,
    I learnt A lot of different things about frogs like the way they feel,
    Maybe you could Add a bit more information on the side like some facts about your frog
    Please visit my blog
    <A HREF="https://makauribrianal.blogspot.com/”>here</A>

    Mā te wā
    Briana

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  2. Kia ora. I am Manaaki from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked that you put clear images of the frog.Maybe you could add writing next time so it is easier to tell what is happening. Please visit my blog.
    https://gisintmanaakid.blogspot.com/

    Mā te wā
    Manaaki

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  3. Hi I'm oscar and I go to gisnt.
    I really liked you frog It was so cool how you described it was really cool text me at

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  4. Hi i'm Te-Rehua I go to Ahipara and I really liked how you described the frog. Maybe next tome you could write about what its like in the water.

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