Friday, 2 November 2018

Wellington Writing



We were on school camp on the big bus going to Zealandia. I was excited out of my skin, we finally arrived after a trip that had felt like hours because of busy wellington traffic. In no time we were in the dence bush looking for tuatara, and noisy birds. There was a deep sound, the ground started to shake as if it was dancing. Eeeekkkk BOOM a huge tree came down splitting me from the rest of my class. I fell down a muddy track. I bumped up and down hitting roots and branches that had fallen down. The earthquake had stopped now and I could hear the distinct screams of my class . I slowly came to stop I had cuts and bruises all over me. Broken trees were laid everywhere. I felt sick.

I was completely utterly definitely lost and to make matters worse it just had start raining…… A Lot

I sat down and started yelling for help but no reply. I was cold and wet when I saw a big tuatara. Fantails and tui and a even a small family of weka.Suddenly they started getting bigger and stronger. I ran as fast as I could to a little clearing next to a lake with a terrifiing mosasaurus jumped out taking out one of the hugeeee towering BRACHIOSAURUSES and pulling it under the water. I felt like I was going to pop I had just seen a mosasaurus take down a brachiosaurus.I had to get back. I was scared and frezzing wondering what could happen to me next. I ran up a hill avoiding all the compsognathus (small fast dinosaurs). As I scaled the hill I felt like a hero. I could see the entrance of zealandia and the rest of my class.

I started sprinting down I did not notice the rustle of leaves behind me. Suddenly I heard the slitting sound of a velociraptor on my right .I realized all the harmless creatures that live in Zealandia had turned into the very scary dinosaurs, and all the tui had turned into velociraptors. The velociraptor finished its call and then it was silence. Schh schhh schh three wide eyed velociraptors. The biggest one jumped one me and dug its huge third toe into me.It opened its mouth wide when. Boom Boom Boom a huge trex came bolling through the trees and took the three velociraptors.

I blacked out




I woke up on a hospital bed All my class looking at me.

I Had a huge stitched up bleeding scar on my chest

What an adventure.




By Blake




When we did our Wellington Writing we had to research first.
I learnt all the birds lizards and other animals. We had to put a twist on it in mine it's the dinosaurs
It was very fun writing and i enjoyed doing it.



3 comments:

  1. Hi Blake my name is Riley from Pompallier school Kaitiaa i am a year 6 boy ka pai Blake i really love your piece of writing keep it up :D

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  2. Kia Ora Blake
    I'm Tiana, I really liked your writing it was very interesting and had lots of descriptive words. I found it interesting when all the dinosaurs randomly appeared because it was very unexpected. Nice work Blake!

    Please come check out my blog http://pcstianar.blogspot.com/
    Tiana

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